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The story itself is interesting enough to keep me reading although I found I could stand to read it only for so long before I had to stop and recover from all the errors. I started to just give up a few times, but the story itself kept me reading. After awhile, the game became how many pages would I read before I got to more errors. I rarely had to wait very long. Although there are two or three times in the story where there is a jump in logic or unexplained backstory, as a whole it hangs together fairly well. But the errors! No punctuation where there should have been, wrong punctuation, wrong verb tenses, verb tense changes in the same sentence or in the middle of a paragraph, wrong pronoun used (the whole I/me, he/she/him/her thing), missing words in sentences, wrong words used in sentences, sentences just ending when it is obvious a word or phrase is needed to complete the thought, oh need I go on? Well, why not? My personal favorite was sentences that make no sense because a word (or sometimes words) is/are missing and /or the wrong word is used. An example is: "No matter what I do lie, omit people always know it." Huh? Ninety-nine percent of the time the reader can decipher what is meant and is able to read on, but the point is, the reader shouldn't have to. It is the job of the author to fix these things before it is put out there for people to put good money down for the opportunity to read it. Do yourself and everyone who wants to read this a favor. GET AN EDITOR! Even getting together a group of friends and reading it out loud would help, or joining a writing group who will give honest criticism would be another good step. Spell check alone won't help--the wrong words are spelled correctly. Grammar check would help. But an honest paid editor would probably be best.

SMALL SPOILER ALERT

The ending is not a happy one, but it is the only one possible given the personalities involved and given the mistake the good guys made over and over of turning their backs on the bad guy.


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Iris Billie Langford Books Reviews

Interesting story and suspenseful.
I did not finish it because it was too hard to read. There are too many grammar errors, misspellings, and inaccuracies in the book. I do not recommend it.
Didn't enjoy it very much. Found many errors 'shuttered' for 'shuddered', grammatical errors, logic errors, being an English major, theses things loom large in my reading.
Poorly developed. The reader's overriding reaction is frustration with the main character, I'm afraid. The ending was awful; the book needs an epilogue or something. I think it would be a good book if author re-wrote it.
Okay, call me a sucker, but I like to think that the good always wins. I'm am totally on the fence with this book. The first chapter was kinda hard to get through, but it eventually picked up to where I was getting into the book. Then "bam" it was over, and with an ending that make me want to choke someone (yes, I get that way with reading!). It's wouldn't be such a bad ending if there was another book coming out to further the story (hint hint), and satisfy my need for the happily ever after.
It could have been good but there were so many editing issues- changes form past to present tense, words hat aren’t words tucked into the story, odd pacing with not enough character development to really understand why characters were acting in odd ways... I only read the first 25% but just couldn’t keep going after “tireder” popped up.
This was not the Egyptian Archaeology mystery that the initial storyline hinted, in regard to flashbacks when touching the ring of Nefertari with bare
hands. Instead, the story is about a sadistic psychopath who stalks his lab partner. Why did the author not develop the story into an interesting
archeology mystery rather than a shallow love triangle that has the usual deadly ending.
The story itself is interesting enough to keep me reading although I found I could stand to read it only for so long before I had to stop and recover from all the errors. I started to just give up a few times, but the story itself kept me reading. After awhile, the game became how many pages would I read before I got to more errors. I rarely had to wait very long. Although there are two or three times in the story where there is a jump in logic or unexplained backstory, as a whole it hangs together fairly well. But the errors! No punctuation where there should have been, wrong punctuation, wrong verb tenses, verb tense changes in the same sentence or in the middle of a paragraph, wrong pronoun used (the whole I/me, he/she/him/her thing), missing words in sentences, wrong words used in sentences, sentences just ending when it is obvious a word or phrase is needed to complete the thought, oh need I go on? Well, why not? My personal favorite was sentences that make no sense because a word (or sometimes words) is/are missing and /or the wrong word is used. An example is "No matter what I do lie, omit people always know it." Huh? Ninety-nine percent of the time the reader can decipher what is meant and is able to read on, but the point is, the reader shouldn't have to. It is the job of the author to fix these things before it is put out there for people to put good money down for the opportunity to read it. Do yourself and everyone who wants to read this a favor. GET AN EDITOR! Even getting together a group of friends and reading it out loud would help, or joining a writing group who will give honest criticism would be another good step. Spell check alone won't help--the wrong words are spelled correctly. Grammar check would help. But an honest paid editor would probably be best.

SMALL SPOILER ALERT

The ending is not a happy one, but it is the only one possible given the personalities involved and given the mistake the good guys made over and over of turning their backs on the bad guy.